9th Feb

9^th Feb

Today we re-watched our performances from the past week. We picked up on our strengths and weaknesses.

-       -   Start the performance with Daisy speaking not Nathan to tie in with James playing the violin to annoy Nathan even more.

-        -  Introduce why we are in the detention room quicker

-      -    Someone should say something to frustrate Nathan to lead to him getting angry.

-      -    Maybe put lyrics to the jingle at the beginning

-      -    Maybe at the beginning we shouldn’t just sit there, we could be doing something like throwing paper aeroplanes at each other and doodling in books etc.

We also thought of an ending to the performance, we decided to do an on-going joke that would reoccur within the performance about him escaping to be a formula one driver. We also want him at the end to come across in a racing car to end the play.