13th March

13^th March

Questions for the lie detector were changed slightly. We had feedback that one of the questions was not funny enough, so it was suggested that Daisy says the line ‘Do you pick your nose’ and then James could come in and shout out ‘and eat it’.

We also changed the music being played by James, we had remembered that we had forgot the rule of three and maybe that’s why we are not getting the reaction we want from the audience. The first song will be ‘Bob the Builder’ and then ‘Postman Pat’ then lastly the intense background music.

Another change was the Quiz off. We changed the opening music to ‘The Eye Of The Tiger’ and set it out like a wrestling match. Nathan is warming up by answering practise questions Lily gives him and Daisy is ‘Punching’ numbers in to a calculator that James is holding up. This makes gets rid of any air in between the movement of props, it is more entertaining.

Today however we were performing to a full audience of our peers for the last time as we were to go out on Monday. I felt this wasn’t best performance we had done. We also seemed to have more feedback than every before

Most important Feedback points of today –        

                            

-          Lily remember your lines

-          Needs to be clearer that Daisy’s scary story is about a rabbit not Mr. Snuggles or another hamster.

-          The explosion of the computer needs to be bigger – maybe an exploding noise, more cables etc coming out of it

-          The back stories just seems like an add on and it doesn’t go anywhere, they are not working

-          Everything is a bit slow and energy needs to be kept up