6th March

6^th March

Today we were in the process of thinking of something to liven up the lie detector scene as we had been getting feedback that it wasn’t a gripping as it could be. We came up with three questions to ask Lily,

Is your name really Lily?

Do you wear big fat multi coloured polka dot granny knickers?

Do you pick your nose… and eat it?

We performed that scene to our fellow peers and were given feedback…

-          needs to be quicker paced

-          the energy needs to be higher

-          the ‘awwww’ when presenting the lie detector needs to be bigger and come in as soon as it has been waved up in the air by Nathan

-          Nathan needs to be more nerdy – (for this we came up with a plan that we could possibly change his character name so that he can be in that character and not himself).

-          Lilly needs to be more angry and louder